Hmm
Well, it was funny... Pretty good voice acting, could be awesome if you got a better mic ;)
But I felt that it was not much of an animation, cause for most of the part, there was just pictures with voice-acting in the background. E.g. with the lady lying in blood, the radio, etc... So try to animate more, and it will be much better :) Like with the radio, if you just make it... move, or animate something on the screen, or someone turning it on/off, it will be much better. Also work on the lip-syncing.
Good luck on other projects!